Oral Presentation

Mi life in ages and stages

Hello my name is Adrià and today I will talk to you about my oral presentation: My life with ages and stages. In this presentation I will explain my life organized by the general stages of the life of all humans: the infancy, the childhood, the adolescence and the adulthood.

Now, I start this presentation asking you about one thing: What's the first stages in the life of our lives? You know? (Yes, is the infancy). For this, I start explaining you about my infancy.

1. My infancy started the 3 of August of nineteen ninety-six, the day of my born. I was born in the city of Girona, in Catalonia. At the moment of my born, at 8'30 a.m, I weighed 3kg. I was born in the hospital Josep Trueta, the most important hospital of the city. I stayed for five days in the hospital with my family, but when I let the hospital, I went to home, finally. My mother says me that at the moment of my born, She was very happy, but She said: God less me!

2. Now, I will explain you my life when I was a baby of two years old. When I was two, I lived in the Carrer Nou, in Figueres. I went in a nursery called Girasol. There were a lot of childrens in the nursery, but in the actuality, I have a good friend from it. I remember, my parents bought me a tricycle for my second anniversary. It was beautiful but I fell on it a lot of times, for this, I don't keep a good memory of the tricycle. It was horrible.

3. My childhood started when I was 3 years old. I remember at the age of 4, my parents bought me a new bicycle, there was bigger than the tricycle but much more secure for me. I remember that in the same year, I went to live in France because my father found a new work for be a doctor. There, I knew a lot of friends that in the acctuality I have even. In France I learnt a lot french, but now I don't remember anything. I stayed in France one year.

4. After my stage in France, my family went to live in Vila-sacra, my actual village. Also, I began my school age in the Joana d'Empúries school, where I stayed for five years. There, I knew a lot of my actuals friends for example Pablo and Gerard. At the age of 8 years old I went to hollidays in Egipt for one week. There, I looked the biggest pyramid in the world, the esfing, a lot of museums and the river Nile. At the age of 9, I had the most difficult year of my life because I had an accident of bicycle and I failed two months in the school.

5. Now I'm a teenager because I'm 16 years old. I'm doing 1^st Bachillerat in the Castello d'empúries highschool, place where I knew a lot of new friends. At the moment, I play football in the team of my village. I'm playing in Quarta Catalana in the group 31, We don't are the best football players in the zone but We are competitors. One of the things that I'm thinking about, is the debate of the independence of Catalonia. What do you think about this discussion? Is Catalonia capicity for be independence? Why?

6. I don't know my future adulthood, but I know that I want to be in a future. I will to go to the university for study medicine, but It's so difficult because I need a very good mark of the Bachillerat. For this, one of my year resolution is study every day for, one day in the future, be a good doctor. Also, at the age of 18, I will to have the driving licence and drive my car in the big cities of Barcelona, Madrid, New York...

7. This is my oral presentation and now, I hope you know a little more from me. Have you got any questions?

Self-evaluation

In my opinion my presentation was good but It should have been better. Now, I will explain the oral presentation with the next sections:

 

Presentation: I used the power point for do the presentation. It was good but there are other best programmes for do an oral presentation, for example the prezi. I put a lot of pictures on it. So, I think that would be 10 out of 10.

 

Body Language: In this aspect I should do better because during the presentation I don't move my body and I have a lot of nervous.  So, I think that would be 5 out of 10.

 

Structure: For my, the structure of the presentation was good because I organized my life in ages and stages in order of ages: when I child.... and finally when I will be elderly. So, I think that would be 10 out of 10.

 

Content: I tolk about my life in ages and stages and I explained all the stages in 5-10 lines. I explained a lot of curiositys about my life: where I lived in all of my stages, things I think during my life, my dreams, my acctitudes and my life during the adolescence. The information was complete but poor comparate with others presentations. So, I think that would be 30 out of 40.

 

Language: I thing my language was good but It should have been better because during the presentation I don't explain about all the things there are in the text. Also, I used a lot of populars words about the stages of the life: the childhood, the infancy, the toddler, the adolescence and the elderly. So, I think that would be 10 out of 20.

 

Pronunciation: I have to improve my pronunciation, so I have to practise more. I know how I have to say the words, but I think that with nerves I don't remember it. So, I think that would be 5 out of 10

 

Total: I had a 7 in my final mark. I think that this note was good, but I want more, so I have to improve

 

 Transcription:

 

Hola el meu nom és Adrià i avui parlaré sobre la meva presentació oral: La meva vida amb les edats i etapes. En aquesta presentació explicaré la meva vida organitzada per les etapes generals de la vida de tots els éssers humans: la infància, l'adolescència i l'adultesa.Ara, començo aquesta presentació fent una pregunte sobre una cosa: Quina és la primera etapa de les nostres vides? (Sí, és la infància). Per això, començo explicant la meva infància.1. La meva infància va començar el 3/08/12, el dia del meu naixement. Vaig néixer a la ciutat de Girona, a Catalunya. En el moment del meu naixement, en 8'30 am, pesava 3 kg. Vaig néixer a l'Hospital Josep Trueta de Girona, l'hospital més important de la ciutat. Em vaig allotjar per cinc dies a l'hospital amb la meva família, però quan vaig deixar l'hospital, vaig anar a la casa, per fi. La meva mare em diu que en el moment del meu naixement, ella estava molt feliç, però ella va dir: Déu em menys!
2. Ara, et vaig a explicar la meva vida quan jo era un nadó de dos anys d'edat. Quan tenia dos anys, vivia al carrer Nou, a Figueres. Me'n vaig anar en un viver anomenat Gira-sol. Hi havia un munt de nens a la guarderia, però en l'actualitat, tinc un bon amic d'ella. Recordo que els meus pares em van comprar un tricicle per el meu segon aniversari. Era bonic, però vaig caure-hi un munt de vegades, per això, no guardo un bon record del tricicle. Va ser horrible.3. La meva infància va començar quan jo tenia 3 anys d'edat. Recordo que en l'edat de 4 anys, els meus pares em van comprar una bicicleta nova, no era més gran que el tricicle, però molt més segur per a mi. Recordo que en el mateix any, em vaig anar a viure a França perquè el meu pare va trobar una nova feina per ser metge. Allà vaig conèixer un munt d'amics que al acctuality tinc encara. A França he après molt francès, però ara no me'n recordo de res. Em vaig quedar a França un any.4. Després de la meva etapa a França, la meva família va anar a viure a Vila-sacra, el meu poble real. També, vaig començar la meva edat escolar a l'escola Joana d'Empúries, on vaig romandre durant cinc anys. Allà vaig conèixer un munt dels meus amics dades reals, per exemple, Pau i Gerard. A l'edat de 8 anys vaig anar a hollidays en Egipt per una setmana. Allà, em va mirar la piràmide més gran del món, el esfing, molts dels museus i del riu Nil A l'edat de 9 anys, he tingut l'any més difícil de la meva vida perquè vaig tenir un accident de bicicleta i he fallat dos mesos a l'escola.5. Ara sóc un adolescent, perquè tinc 16 anys d'edat. Estic fent primer Bachillerat al Highschool Castelló d'Empúries, lloc on vaig conèixer un munt de nous amics. De moment, jo jugo a futbol a l'equip del meu poble. Estic jugant a Quarta Catalana al grup 31, No són els millors jugadors de futbol a la zona, però som competidors. Una de les coses que estic pensant, és el debat de la independència de Catalunya. Què pensa vostè sobre aquesta discussió? És capicity Catalunya per ser la independència? Per què?6. No sé la meva edat adulta futur, però sé que vull ser en un futur. Vaig a anar a la universitat per estudiar medicina, però és tan difícil perquè necessito una marca molt bona de la Bachillerat. Per això, un dels meus resolució de l'any és estudiar cada dia durant un dia en el futur, ser un bon metge. A més, a l'edat de 18 anys, ho faré per tenir la llicència de conduir i conduir el meu cotxe a les grans ciutats de Barcelona, ​​Madrid, Nova York ...
7. Aquesta és la meva presentació oral i ara, espero que sàpigues una mica més de mi. Tens alguna pregunta?

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